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If my f e a t h e r s could speak volumes ..
can I bring you out to accept me?
If miracles waited all their lives ..
would you want to see through to the end?

Walking
    away from
    the things I adore ..

if truth was a sign,
can I escape the tragedy I endure?

Pattern isn't in my veins ..
Fathering my beliefs ..
gathering moss for my frustration ..
floating irrationally without fruition.

What hole can give me a light?
goodness could breathe me my morphine ..
but my fears idle me to tears ..
forcing me to begin alone.

Couldn't see you there ..
were you believing in something?
After eating my hopes into your selfishness ..
Can you look into my eyes in r e g r e t?

Never could you place yourself in my circle ..
drinking on depression ..
and numbing on airless excitements ..
Are you happy?

Separating memories, Separating moments ..
shattering mercilessly into the unknown
diminishing goals of guidance ..
putting my sanity to price ..
could I forgive myself to give in?

Hate ..
Show me where you been ..
ringing true to freedom ..
but I dare you to push devotion ..
into my sparkling offering?

Face me ..
Face me ..
Face me ..
Fall from within ..
bring me to my knees ..
but don't bury me in shackles.
:iconmiqsh:
But many pictures flit my mind .. so this is more like a journal entry. Words aren't enough to clear the obscurity of the loss.

We find a fork .. but can I repeat my actions to surprise myself? hmm ..

EDIT: I found this in my scraps forgotten .. polished it with flashy HTML codes and minor changes. It looks like it's 6 months old.
This scrap became vague in the beginning, but towards the end .. I spelled out my emotions more.
love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
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*joanbausher Jan 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Hey Miqsh,
I enjoyed so much reading this piece, it is more than beautiful. It says so much that I am going to have to read and re-read it several times. I could comment on each part of this, where would I begin though! Love it!
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:iconmiqsh:
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Thanks Joan,
You can take your time to come back here and comment .. I would love to hear what strikes you and such :)

Please give me some critique about these two pieces as well:
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I realize those pieces might not be as powerful as Forestry in some ways .. maybe because I had multiple emotions and messages instilled into Forestry without realizing about it. I guess it was an honest piece just as are the rest :aww:
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